domingo, 4 de septiembre de 2016

In love

we were told to write a poem on literature
 classes and my poem is about what love mean to me.


              In love

  your eyes meet my eyes 
and I feel I touch de sky
that what love means to me
the best feeling you may have

you are the support  of my heart
if I feel bad you make me happy
we believe that we will died together 
but that isn't true or maybe

when the sun goes down 
and the moonlight cover the sky 
my feelings start going down
so I think over the grass
maybe, our love is a lie

I lay on the bed 
the evil thought goes all over the sky 
and my hands touch your skin like the clouds on the sky 
your love comes like sun to my eyes

that’s feel the love 

1 comentario:

  1. Amazing work Julian. You´ve written a very deep and descriptivo poem. It seems to be answering two tasks since, on the one hand, it describes what love is to you but it also describes a change of state. Congratulations!
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